Hi Colby Thank you for ask me how I´m in the high school. When the high school starts was rare for my because its very different to the school,but when I was one or one and a half week in the high school I move better to one class to other.
When I start basketball,because basketball clases start two weeks after the high school I was a little more stressed because It takes time of my weekend but I like and now I am less worried about the time it takes because I organised my days.
The high school its harder because is a lor more theory to study but if you study a little bit all the days you can pass the course with a very good mark.
I hope I will pass this course so we are going to see you the next course.
That makes sense that you have to study more but I like that you are more organized! I hope you pass the course as well! I would love to see you in the next term.
Hi Colby! I´m now on my grandfather´s house and I decided to write you.
You have a lot of clases per day. I´m going to tell you how are my monday clases. When I wake up in the morning, I´m very tired, but I have to go class. Then, I go with my fiend Yaiza to Tomás y Valiente, because we meet with our friend there. Later, when I arrive high school, I have my first class of the week, that is geography and history. I have this class from eight twenty to nine fifteen. Then I go to my second class, that is maths. This class is from nine twenty to 10:10.
Later I go to my English class, that is my favourite subject.
At eleven five I have twenty five minutes to stay in the playground with my friends.
Then, at eleven thirty I have ethical values with my teacher Esther D.
Next I have lenguage from twelve thirty to 13:20.
Later, I have physical education!!!!! And then I go home!!!!
I am sorry you are so tired in the mornings! Maybe try to go to bed earlier. I think it is very cool that English is your favorite subject. Great job with your post! Enjoy your time at your grandfather's house.
How’s it going? Thanks for your email! It’s great to hear from you! I’m happy to hear that you are having a good time with your new special school and with some of your teachers. I was really exited when you said that you’ve alredy 8 students at your classes, it is great! And don’t worry about how much homework do you have, I promise you that I have more than you as well.
First, I am very happy at my school, there’re new teachers and they teach very well, and I have so many new friends, but no one is compared with you. However, I have a classmate that is awful! She’s lazy, annoying and she’s always play truants! I would never be like her eighter, and I hope you too. I have a lot of classes during the day, I was very busy with a lot of exams, homework and projects during the last month, that’s why I couldn’t wrote you! But now, I’m more unwind and enjoying my self, in other words, having a whale of a time, because we have almost finished our exams, so I made a hole in my agenda to write you. And another thing is that in the class exchanges the halls are really bustling, I can’t even walk! The last week I tried to go for another hall for dodge the people. But a boy was running very fast and he was hit with me and I fell down, I was really shame.
On the one hand, in my family all its going very good, no problems and no fights with my brother or my cousins. Besides, the next week my mum said that we’ll go to the amusement park, and later I’ll say her if you could come!
On the other hand, my dad is saying that we’ll have to change to other house a little bit far of the city because of his new job, but it would be the next year.
Sorry, I’ve got to go now. But I promise that I will email you again tomorrow. Bye for now, Paula XXX
Wow! Such a great response! I like how much you shared with me. More information is usually better. So, thank you for that. I think it is great you are getting along with your family as well!
Hi Colby i was very happy for reccibing your email, your email is very interesting.
And I going to tell you waht is one of my days.
6.59´59: wake up 7:15: I been with the mobile phone 7:30: breakfast 7: 45. seen the TV 7:55 go to school
MY SCHOOL HORARY
MONDAY 1º geography and history 2º maths➕➖✖➗ 3º english 4º ethical values or religion 5º language 6º P.E TUESDAY
1º english 2º geography and history 3º language 4º biology and geology 5º maths 6º tutory WEDNEDAY
1º geography and history 2º english 3º maths 4º language 5º arts 6º technology 7º ethycal values or religion THURSDAY 1º english 2º germany or freunch 3º P.E 4º lenguage 5º arts 6º biology and geology FRIDAY������✨✨
1º technology 2º biology and geology 3º maths 4º gremany or french 5º language 6º ingles
thats all my school horary lets pass to my normal life:
when school finished I go to home and I see Dragon Ball Super. Well thwn I been wih the mobile phone and I still with it for only 4 hours.
This is alright. You seem to have sent me your schedule rather than have a conversation with me about it. How can I know how you feel about math class? All I know is when you have it. I will say I love what you said about going to sleep. Very funny!
Hello! So, I just wanted to start with saying: lenghich is actually spelled language. Just letting you know! Some of what you said is good, but there is not enough here. I need just a little more information from you. However, I like what you do have. It is good that you study. Make sure you pay attention to phrases like, "how to get from one class to another."
Hi there! Just wanted to say that we do not say "with anothers friends." It is better to say "with other friends." I like a lot of the information you have. However, you wrote it like a list or a schedule planner. It is hard to have a conversation with you about this since it is not really as a paragraph. Your Wedensdays look difficult, but you seem to have a lot of fun in the evening! I love movies... Just make sure next time you write in paragraph form as well as share more information!
Thank you for asking me how I am in the Institute.I think it's more funny that in the school,bit the exams are more difficult than in the school.
I me es to study more if I want to don't fail the exams.If I study a lot I can aprove with a 10 in a lot of exams because I have a lot of memory.
The firsts days i lose in the changues of clases but now I can go to others clases well.
Now I am don't having not of a todo student but I aprove it is something.
I think that in your University you have to do exams and projects like this but more,more dificult.
In news asignatures like thecnology or biology and geology it is more difficult to aprove but in this two subjects I am very good in the two clases is less difficult to aprove for me.
Glad to hear back from you! I think you are wanting to say "improve" rather than "aprove." Make sure you are understanding what you are writing as well. I sometimes cannot fully understand what you are trying to say like, "The firsts days i lose in the changues of clases but now I can go to others clases well." I think you want to say "I was lost the first day because of the class changes but now I am good at getting to my classes." Just a few spelling errors but still good!
Thanks for asking to me. The high school has already been fantastic for me . Can you believe that first i thought it would be worse than what is being except of the hour we start the high school... also i love it because i 've meet a lot of new friends and can you believe that one is my neighbour !? Is fantastic to make a lot of new friends and i would like how was the high school for you!
Hi! I first want to say that I need more information from you! Your response is a little short. I see very few spelling errors! "Met" rather than "meet." I also think you are only missing just a few words in your sentences. I remember when I was in school and I had the same feeling. It is nice to make so many friends!
Thanks for ask me how I am in the institute You are good teaching in this institute?Did you think we were going to be more unruly, that we were going to be more obedient or were we going to be exactly the way we are?So,in first day of institute I have a surprise because I thought that in my class there were people with beard and that they were going to take me four and a half heads,but not,some if it takes me four and a half heads,but all of them are like me,because I think I have the best class of institute.
At the first two or three weeks I only talk with my Friends that are from the same school that I went,El Trigal.
Then,one day I started to talk with other classmates and I think that all of them are very nice and kind.
All the people say that in the institute are less homework than in school,NOOOOOO,that´s false,as minimum in my class.
The exams are very more difficult than in school,but the first is get used to the first tests to know how they are.
Outside scool the tuesdays and thursdays I go to karate,I´m blue belt.And in the wednesdays and fridays I go to music,I play the clarinet.
I also like to go in Winter to do snow skiing with my dad.
My fathers only leave me the Play Station the weekends,so the weekends I take advantage and I play with my Friends or with my cousins.
Howdy! I wanted to start by saying you need to make sure you remember conjugating verbs. "Thanks for askING me how I am....." I like your first few questions haha! I do like it here and enjoy teaching! Some students seem to be more undisciplined than I thought, but many are what I expected! All good things. Your response is pretty good! Just a few mistakes here and there. Good job.
Thanks for asking how has been the high school for me. It has been perfect to make new friends and some of them to be my neighbours. First i thought the high school would be worst because of other bad people but i relact with people with my age and no more so i can be relaxing and very happy with my friends also of other schools and i would like to know how was high school for you
I see that you have a lot of work and lot of classes. Now i will tell you how are my days of my week:
The first thing that I do is to make muy backpack and later I go to a place where I meet my old classmates of the school and we go all together to the highschool.
Depending on the day I go to a clase or another.But the firts days I was so lost and most of the times I was late.A good thing is that now i know where are the most of the classes.
The last thing that I want to tell you is good luck with your classes.
Hello! We want "my backpack" rather than "muy backpack." I understand being lost your first days of school! Moving from class to class is normal for me, but it is hard when you first start classes. Thank you and good luck with your classes! I like what you had to say. I just wish I had more. Next time I need a little more information, but what you do have is pretty good!
Hi Colby Your life at the university is so cool. I want to have one similar for me. My life at the high school I also cool, but for my opinion I have been in it so less time. I need to be more time for have a concrete opinion, but the small time that I have, I feel comfortable. We have more subjects and there are more difficult (but not all) than in the school. Like in math, I mask in the first exam a 9´9 . This is an example of bad luck. I like also music, like you. I play the piano, I´m in 5th grade. Outside the high school I like go to the village. In mi village, I do races of tricycles (is not a joke ). My cousins, my sister and I runs so fast to the finish. My cousin wins a lot (but at the beginning I win him) because his tricycle is more aerodynamic. These is a summary of a little of my life good bye and see you. Best Victor
Hi! I am so glad you like music as well! I mostly sing but I wish I played the piano better. I like a lot of what you have to say! I wish I could have tricycle races... That sounds like a lot of fun... You only have a few errors in here and minimal spelling errors. Good post.
To: Colby F Hi Colby I read your email and it was interesting what you said. My schedule it starts at 7 o’clock at morning, I go to school at 7:30 to arrive at 8 o’clock. Then I am at school since 8 o’clock to 2:15 the days that I don’t have seven hour , in this case I go home at 3:15. The classes past very fast for me and this is fantastic but sometimes it goes very slow, when I am burring. For example in Biology is very boring for me but history no. So, this is all, see you soon Sara h
Hello! First off, I want to say that you have few mistakes, but I could use more information next time. Your response is a little short. Nothing tells me which classes you like or which classes you have a lot of friends or succeed in. These are just some examples! Other than that, I like what you have said. I am a fan of history so it is not boring for me either.
Hi colby, All you say is very interesting, and thanks you for asking how has been the has been the change from school to high scool. And answering to your question I was wery nervous, because I was scare the first week was so strange to me because in my school we didn´t change of class, and the teachers comes to our class, but here is completly different we have to change of class. The therd day I made friend of one girll colled Ariadna,because the first two daws I only talked wiht my friends of my old school, it was very funny to meet new people,all my new class is very nice. I always get up sooner,at 7 o’clock and I have breakfast, later I dress up, and I went to the place I meet with my friends, and then we go all together to the high school.We have to arrive at 8:20 ,and we go out at 2:15, the classes last 55 minutes each one, and we have five minutes to move from one class from an other.The break last 25 minutes.On wensdays we have seventh that it’s an extra class, we have religion.I have karate on Tuesdays and on Thersdays,I am green belt.The classes are from 18:00 to 19:00.I go to dance too I have classes on Fridays, from 15:00 to 18:00. Some people say to me that in the high scool we are going to have less homework, but that is worng, maybe we have more.
Hey there! I just want to start by saying you need to make sure to pay attention to when you are conjugating. Ah Karate! So cool! I think you have more homework in high school as well! I will say that there are several errors that I think could be fixed if you tried saying the sentences out loud. You are either missing a few words or have not conjugated the verbs properly. Your schedule sounds very interesting, though! I would love to hear more about it.
Hi Colby Your university was amazing. I hope mine similar. My live in the school is also goood. You have a lot of homework and I don´t want to have so much. You are rigth i´m very busy (like you).
Hi. First, your response is quite short. Too short, actually. I know nothing about your life or daily schedule other than it is similar to mine. I totally agree about the homework part! As you get older there always seems to be more homework! Make sure you use the properly conjugated verbs and thank you for your response!
Hi Colvy Thanks for your email! Your live is really interesting , its so nice to hear that you like music a lot because i loved to much and you know it because im going to chorus with you . You sing very very very good and i think that you were the best in your university .
Thank you for asking how the things are going in the high school . I think is very nice and very interesting because there are lots of different subjects like : mathematics , language , english , technology , arts , biology and geology , history , german , P.E and religion . All the subjects are very interesting but for me the best is german . Then in afternoons i have another chorus , classical ballet and skating .
I will like to go to your university when i will be older because i love to sing .
Howdy! Lovely response. You seem to have just a few errors! Like we want to say "Your life is really interesting," rather than "your live is very interesting." Thank you for your comment on my singing! I am very flattered! I hope to be the best singer I can be. I will say you wrote a good amount of information but I wish I had more information pertaining to your schedule! I want to know more about what you do!
HI COLBY YOUR LIFE IS SO COOL.ITS MORE COOL THAN MINE.MY LIFE IS: ON MONDAY:I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL ON MORNINGS AND ON AFTERNONS Y GO TO THE BASKETBALL TRAINING.AND ALSO I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY. ON TUESDAY:I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL ON MORNINGS AND ON AFTERNONS Y DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY. ON WENDSDAY:ON MORNINGS I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNON I GO TO BASKETBALL CLASSES AND I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY. ON THURSDAY:ON MORNING I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNONS I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY. ON FRIDAY:ON MORNING I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNON I GO TO MY BASKETBALL TRAING. ON THE WEEKEND:I PLAY A BASKETBALL MATCH,I DO Y HOMEWORK AND STUDY AND I PLAY TO THE PS4. THIS IS A LITTLE PART OF MY DAILY LIFE. BEST SAUL
YOU DO NOT HAVE TO WRITE IN ALL CAPS. I will say a lot of this information seems have been copied and pasted. So, I do not have a lot of information from you. You also seem to have sent me a list or a schedule planner rather than have a conversation with me. You say you go to high school, but what happens at high school? I need information like this. I would not say my life is cooler than yours haha. Our lives are just different. I like to play video games as well, but I have not been able to play lately. I have been very busy. Many of your sentences are great but I need much more information!
Hi Colby
ResponderEliminarThank you for ask me how I´m in the high school.
When the high school starts was rare for my because its very different to the school,but when I was one or one and a half week in the high school I move better to one class to other.
When I start basketball,because basketball clases start two weeks after the high school I was a little more stressed because It takes time of my weekend but I like and now I am less worried about the time it takes because I organised my days.
The high school its harder because is a lor more theory to study but if you study a little bit all the days you can pass the course with a very good mark.
I hope I will pass this course so we are going to see you the next course.
Best,
Daniel G
Daniel,
EliminarHi!
That makes sense that you have to study more but I like that you are more organized! I hope you pass the course as well! I would love to see you in the next term.
To:Colby W.
ResponderEliminarHi Colby! I´m now on my grandfather´s house and I decided to write you.
You have a lot of clases per day. I´m going to tell you how are my monday clases.
When I wake up in the morning, I´m very tired, but I have to go class.
Then, I go with my fiend Yaiza to Tomás y Valiente, because we meet with our friend there.
Later, when I arrive high school, I have my first class of the week, that is geography and history. I have this class from eight twenty to nine fifteen.
Then I go to my second class, that is maths. This class is from nine twenty to 10:10.
Later I go to my English class, that is my favourite subject.
At eleven five I have twenty five minutes to stay in the playground with my friends.
Then, at eleven thirty I have ethical values with my teacher Esther D.
Next I have lenguage from twelve thirty to 13:20.
Later, I have physical education!!!!!
And then I go home!!!!
Best,
Alicia R.
Alicia,
EliminarI am sorry you are so tired in the mornings! Maybe try to go to bed earlier. I think it is very cool that English is your favorite subject. Great job with your post! Enjoy your time at your grandfather's house.
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby:
ResponderEliminarHow’s it going? Thanks for your email! It’s great to hear from you! I’m happy to hear that you are having a good time with your new special school and with some of your teachers. I was really exited when you said that you’ve alredy 8 students at your classes, it is great! And don’t worry about how much homework do you have, I promise you that I have more than you as well.
First, I am very happy at my school, there’re new teachers and they teach very well, and I have so many new friends, but no one is compared with you. However, I have a classmate that is awful! She’s lazy, annoying and she’s always play truants! I would never be like her eighter, and I hope you too. I have a lot of classes during the day, I was very busy with a lot of exams, homework and projects during the last month, that’s why I couldn’t wrote you! But now, I’m more unwind and enjoying my self, in other words, having a whale of a time, because we have almost finished our exams, so I made a hole in my agenda to write you. And another thing is that in the class exchanges the halls are really bustling, I can’t even walk! The last week I tried to go for another hall for dodge the people. But a boy was running very fast and he was hit with me and I fell down, I was really shame.
On the one hand, in my family all its going very good, no problems and no fights with my brother or my cousins. Besides, the next week my mum said that we’ll go to the amusement park, and later I’ll say her if you could come!
On the other hand, my dad is saying that we’ll have to change to other house a little bit far of the city because of his new job, but it would be the next year.
Sorry, I’ve got to go now. But I promise that I will email you again tomorrow.
Bye for now,
Paula
XXX
Paual,
EliminarWow! Such a great response! I like how much you shared with me. More information is usually better. So, thank you for that. I think it is great you are getting along with your family as well!
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby i was very happy for reccibing your email, your email is very interesting.
ResponderEliminarAnd I going to tell you waht is one of my days.
6.59´59: wake up
7:15: I been with the mobile phone
7:30: breakfast
7: 45. seen the TV
7:55 go to school
MY SCHOOL HORARY
MONDAY
1º geography and history
2º maths➕➖✖➗
3º english
4º ethical values or religion
5º language
6º P.E
TUESDAY
1º english
2º geography and history
3º language
4º biology and geology
5º maths
6º tutory
WEDNEDAY
1º geography and history
2º english
3º maths
4º language
5º arts
6º technology
7º ethycal values or religion
THURSDAY
1º english
2º germany or freunch
3º P.E
4º lenguage
5º arts
6º biology and geology
FRIDAY������✨✨
1º technology
2º biology and geology
3º maths
4º gremany or french
5º language
6º ingles
thats all my school horary lets pass to my normal life:
when school finished I go to home and I see Dragon Ball Super.
Well thwn I been wih the mobile phone and I still with it for only 4 hours.
11:00: ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Denzel,
EliminarThis is alright. You seem to have sent me your schedule rather than have a conversation with me about it. How can I know how you feel about math class? All I know is when you have it. I will say I love what you said about going to sleep. Very funny!
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby
ResponderEliminarThanks of asking you th me about the high school.
At the beginning it was really difficult to know how to go to a class to another.
We have English and lenghich every day and maths we doesn't have it at Thursday.
My favourite classes are maths English lenghich and physical education.On mu afternoons y study at least one hour.
Much of love
Bakr
Bakr,
EliminarHello! So, I just wanted to start with saying: lenghich is actually spelled language. Just letting you know! Some of what you said is good, but there is not enough here. I need just a little more information from you. However, I like what you do have. It is good that you study. Make sure you pay attention to phrases like, "how to get from one class to another."
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby! thank you very much for your email, I'm going to tell you the things that I do in the week.
ResponderEliminarOn mondays: I go to the high school with my friends, later I go to the football clases with anothers friends.
On tuesdays: I also go to the high school, after the high school I study more because I don't have training so I have this opportunity.
On wednesdays: I have seven clases(so this is so bad) later I go to the training, after training I see a movie.
On thursdays: after the high school I also see a movie or a football match on the T.V. and later I go to the football clases.
On fridays: on afternoons I go to a bar with my cousins and my uncles to enjoy the afternoon.
On saturdays: I go to play a football match with my team. Later I go to a friends's house to enjoy playing with the PS4(a console).
On sundays: I do my homeworks and I study a lot and later I play with my console.
So this are the things that I do during the week.
Kisses
Pablo V
Pablo V,
EliminarHi there! Just wanted to say that we do not say "with anothers friends." It is better to say "with other friends." I like a lot of the information you have. However, you wrote it like a list or a schedule planner. It is hard to have a conversation with you about this since it is not really as a paragraph. Your Wedensdays look difficult, but you seem to have a lot of fun in the evening! I love movies...
Just make sure next time you write in paragraph form as well as share more information!
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby.
ResponderEliminarThank you for asking me how I am in the Institute.I think it's more funny that in the school,bit the exams are more difficult than in the school.
I me es to study more if I want to don't fail the exams.If I study a lot I can aprove with a 10 in a lot of exams because I have a lot of memory.
The firsts days i lose in the changues of clases but now I can go to others clases well.
Now I am don't having not of a todo student but I aprove it is something.
I think that in your University you have to do exams and projects like this but more,more dificult.
In news asignatures like thecnology or biology and geology it is more difficult to aprove but in this two subjects I am very good in the two clases is less difficult to aprove for me.
Thank you for ask me.
Daniel P
Daniel,
EliminarGlad to hear back from you! I think you are wanting to say "improve" rather than "aprove." Make sure you are understanding what you are writing as well. I sometimes cannot fully understand what you are trying to say like, "The firsts days i lose in the changues of clases but now I can go to others clases well." I think you want to say "I was lost the first day because of the class changes but now I am good at getting to my classes." Just a few spelling errors but still good!
Best,
Colby
Hi colby!!!
ResponderEliminarThanks for asking to me.
The high school has already been fantastic for me . Can you believe that first i thought it would be worse than what is being except of the hour we start the high school... also i love it because i 've meet a lot of new friends and can you believe that one is my neighbour !? Is fantastic to make a lot of new friends and i would like how was the high school for you!
Bests
pablo n
Pablo,
EliminarHi! I first want to say that I need more information from you! Your response is a little short. I see very few spelling errors! "Met" rather than "meet." I also think you are only missing just a few words in your sentences. I remember when I was in school and I had the same feeling. It is nice to make so many friends!
Best,
Colby
Hello Colby
ResponderEliminarThanks for ask me how I am in the institute
You are good teaching in this institute?Did you think we were going to be more unruly, that we were going to be more obedient or were we going to be exactly the way we are?So,in first day of institute I have a surprise because I thought that in my class there were people with beard and that they were going to take me four and a half heads,but not,some if it takes me four and a half heads,but all of them are like me,because I think I have the best class of institute.
At the first two or three weeks I only talk with my Friends that are from the same school that I went,El Trigal.
Then,one day I started to talk with other classmates and I think that all of them are very nice and kind.
All the people say that in the institute are less homework than in school,NOOOOOO,that´s false,as minimum in my class.
The exams are very more difficult than in school,but the first is get used to the first tests to know how they are.
Outside scool the tuesdays and thursdays I go to karate,I´m blue belt.And in the wednesdays and fridays I go to music,I play the clarinet.
I also like to go in Winter to do snow skiing with my dad.
My fathers only leave me the Play Station the weekends,so the weekends I take advantage and I play with my Friends or with my cousins.
I wait for your next letter.
Best,
Adrián A.
Adrián,
EliminarHowdy! I wanted to start by saying you need to make sure you remember conjugating verbs. "Thanks for askING me how I am....."
I like your first few questions haha! I do like it here and enjoy teaching! Some students seem to be more undisciplined than I thought, but many are what I expected! All good things. Your response is pretty good! Just a few mistakes here and there. Good job.
Best,
Colby
Hi colby!!
ResponderEliminarThanks for asking how has been the high school for me.
It has been perfect to make new friends and some of them to be my neighbours. First i thought the high school would be worst because of other bad people but i relact with people with my age and no more so i can be relaxing and very happy with my friends also of other schools and i would like to know how was high school for you
Bests
Pablo n
Hello Colby W:
ResponderEliminarI see that you have a lot of work and lot of classes.
Now i will tell you how are my days of my week:
The first thing that I do is to make muy backpack and later I go to a place where I meet my old classmates of the school and we go all together to the highschool.
Depending on the day I go to a clase or another.But the firts days I was so lost and most of the times I was late.A good thing is that now i know where are the most of the classes.
The last thing that I want to tell you is good luck with your classes.
Goodbye.
Iaon,
EliminarHello! We want "my backpack" rather than "muy backpack." I understand being lost your first days of school! Moving from class to class is normal for me, but it is hard when you first start classes. Thank you and good luck with your classes! I like what you had to say. I just wish I had more. Next time I need a little more information, but what you do have is pretty good!
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby
ResponderEliminarYour life at the university is so cool. I want to have one similar for me. My life at the high school I also cool, but for my opinion I have been in it so less time. I need to be more time for have a concrete opinion, but the small time that I have, I feel comfortable. We have more subjects and there are more difficult (but not all) than in the school. Like in math, I mask in the first exam a 9´9 . This is an example of bad luck.
I like also music, like you. I play the piano, I´m in 5th grade.
Outside the high school I like go to the village. In mi village, I do races of tricycles (is not a joke ). My cousins, my sister and I runs so fast to the finish. My cousin wins a lot (but at the beginning I win him) because his tricycle is more aerodynamic. These is a summary of a little of my life good bye and see you.
Best
Victor
Víctor,
EliminarHi! I am so glad you like music as well! I mostly sing but I wish I played the piano better. I like a lot of what you have to say! I wish I could have tricycle races... That sounds like a lot of fun... You only have a few errors in here and minimal spelling errors. Good post.
Best,
Colby
To: Colby F
ResponderEliminarHi Colby
I read your email and it was interesting what you said. My schedule it starts at 7 o’clock at morning, I go to school at 7:30 to arrive at 8 o’clock.
Then I am at school since 8 o’clock to 2:15 the days that I don’t have seven hour , in this case I go home at 3:15. The classes past very fast for me and this is fantastic but sometimes it goes very slow, when I am burring. For example in Biology is very boring for me but history no.
So, this is all, see you soon
Sara h
Sara,
EliminarHello! First off, I want to say that you have few mistakes, but I could use more information next time. Your response is a little short. Nothing tells me which classes you like or which classes you have a lot of friends or succeed in. These are just some examples! Other than that, I like what you have said. I am a fan of history so it is not boring for me either.
Best,
Colby
Hi colby,
ResponderEliminarAll you say is very interesting, and thanks you for asking how has been the has been the change from school to high scool. And answering to your question I was wery nervous, because I was scare the first week was so strange to me because in my school we didn´t change of class, and the teachers comes to our class, but here is completly different we have to change of class. The therd day I made friend of one girll colled Ariadna,because the first two daws I only talked wiht my friends of my old school, it was very funny to meet new people,all my new class is very nice. I always get up sooner,at 7 o’clock and I have breakfast, later I dress up, and I went to the place I meet with my friends, and then we go all together to the high school.We have to arrive at 8:20 ,and we go out at 2:15, the classes last 55 minutes each one, and we have five minutes to move from one class from an other.The break last 25 minutes.On wensdays we have seventh that it’s an extra class, we have religion.I have karate on Tuesdays and on Thersdays,I am green belt.The classes are from 18:00 to 19:00.I go to dance too I have classes on Fridays, from 15:00 to 18:00. Some people say to me that in the high scool we are going to have less homework, but that is worng, maybe we have more.
I wait for your answer.
Bests
Irene.R.S
Irene,
EliminarHey there! I just want to start by saying you need to make sure to pay attention to when you are conjugating. Ah Karate! So cool! I think you have more homework in high school as well! I will say that there are several errors that I think could be fixed if you tried saying the sentences out loud. You are either missing a few words or have not conjugated the verbs properly. Your schedule sounds very interesting, though! I would love to hear more about it.
Best,
Colby
Hi Colby
ResponderEliminarYour university was amazing. I hope mine similar. My live in the school is also goood. You have a lot of homework and I don´t want to have so much. You are rigth i´m very busy (like you).
Well, nice to meet you, I wish you the best.
Asmi
Asmi,
EliminarHi. First, your response is quite short. Too short, actually. I know nothing about your life or daily schedule other than it is similar to mine. I totally agree about the homework part! As you get older there always seems to be more homework! Make sure you use the properly conjugated verbs and thank you for your response!
Best,
Colby
Hi Colvy
ResponderEliminarThanks for your email! Your live is really interesting , its so nice to hear that you like music a lot because i loved to much and you know it because im going to chorus with you . You sing very very very good and i think that you were the best in your university .
Thank you for asking how the things are going in the high school . I think is very nice and very interesting because there are lots of different subjects like : mathematics , language , english , technology , arts , biology and geology , history , german , P.E and religion . All the subjects are very interesting but for me the best is german . Then in afternoons i have another chorus , classical ballet and skating .
I will like to go to your university when i will be older because i love to sing .
Kisses,
Ariadna
Ariadna,
EliminarHowdy! Lovely response. You seem to have just a few errors! Like we want to say "Your life is really interesting," rather than "your live is very interesting." Thank you for your comment on my singing! I am very flattered! I hope to be the best singer I can be. I will say you wrote a good amount of information but I wish I had more information pertaining to your schedule! I want to know more about what you do!
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Colby
HI COLBY
ResponderEliminarYOUR LIFE IS SO COOL.ITS MORE COOL THAN MINE.MY LIFE IS:
ON MONDAY:I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL ON MORNINGS AND ON AFTERNONS Y GO TO THE BASKETBALL TRAINING.AND ALSO I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY.
ON TUESDAY:I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL ON MORNINGS AND ON AFTERNONS Y DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY.
ON WENDSDAY:ON MORNINGS I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNON I GO TO BASKETBALL CLASSES AND I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY.
ON THURSDAY:ON MORNING I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNONS I DO MY HOMEWORK AND STUDY.
ON FRIDAY:ON MORNING I GO TO THE HIGH SCHOOL AND ON AFTERNON I GO TO MY BASKETBALL TRAING.
ON THE WEEKEND:I PLAY A BASKETBALL MATCH,I DO Y HOMEWORK AND STUDY AND I PLAY TO THE PS4.
THIS IS A LITTLE PART OF MY DAILY LIFE.
BEST
SAUL
Saul,
EliminarYOU DO NOT HAVE TO WRITE IN ALL CAPS. I will say a lot of this information seems have been copied and pasted. So, I do not have a lot of information from you. You also seem to have sent me a list or a schedule planner rather than have a conversation with me. You say you go to high school, but what happens at high school? I need information like this. I would not say my life is cooler than yours haha. Our lives are just different. I like to play video games as well, but I have not been able to play lately. I have been very busy. Many of your sentences are great but I need much more information!
Best,
Colby